I'm curious, what do you disagree with in the treatise?
The problem I have with your treatise is the tone. Where is the bliss (piiti), joy (sukha) and ecstasy (jhana)? Otherwise I agree with it.
As for the 1st factor, mindfulness & concentration, I think I know how to practice it. I try to do it as much as possible every moment even though there are many distractions throughout the day. I try to keep those distractions to a minimum.
Being mindful in every moment takes practice and discipline. It is good that you are making the effort. It will pay off.
I do not want to have any friends that are not contemplatives. I try to be alone as much as possible. I live alone, I am a recluse by nature, and I am very comfortable with my solitude. To me silence is a real pleasure, and I find it difficult, and at times painful, to speak to or be around none-contemplatives, they have nothing really interesting to say, and far too often try to engage me in useless idle chatter simply because they are uncomfortable with being silent, or being around someone who is. The forum here is my connection to the people I choose to interact with.
I am a recluse as well. People have not shown me much kindness are understanding, so I see no point in spending time with them.
Anyways, I do frequent walking meditation sessions, and sometimes I can achieve the 1st jhana, and then I'll do sitting meditation. Progress is slow, and there are many set backs, I sometimes have to relearn everything because for some reason the mind/body forgets.
Formal meditation practice is all part of the practice of sati. This is good.
I find Eckhart Tolle's book "The Power of Now" to be an excellent guide on practicing mindfulness & concentration. He even uses the exact same term, the "Source", as in my treatise, "The wisdom of the Source", which was written in 1982. Seems everyone discovers the same thing and uses the same terminology when it comes to describing spiritual phenomena.
The genuine mystics will all be saying the same thing. It is just the translators who too frequently get the translation wrong.
As for the 2nd factor, self-enquiry & investigation of the way, I have studied this closely, and regularly engage in self-enquiry. I question and examine the motivation for everything I do throughout the day, and see if I'm practicing the Eightfold Path, which is the subject of my investigation of the way.
Very good.
As for the 5th factor, tranquility of the 2nd jhana, I'm not there yet, but I try to avoid patterns of thought and situations that cause angst and worry.
As for the 7th factor, equanimity of the 3rd jhana, even though I'm not there yet, I try to allow everything to happen without resistance, interference or thought. The attitude is everything is fine as it is, and I just have to accept everything. But of course there are exceptions, one cannot remain totally passive..
Just living in the present, and practicing mindfulness will eventually pay off. It just takes time and patience and diligence.
I did find myself reflecting upon Emily Maguires lyrics, and your recent comments. Particularly the idea that you could ride a motor cycle across the ocean. Believing that you could do that is fantastic thinking, or it is also called 'magical thinking." We get these fantastic ideas from religion. All religions have their fantastic stories, so it is understandable that we would believe that if we are enlightened, then we should develop fantastic magical powers.
Following some of my most profound religious experiences I too thought, "well, if I am enlightened, then I should have fantastic magical powers, or at least the "source" would feed, cloth and meet my various needs. Well, of course, none of that happened, but I did test the hypothesis. Fortunately I did not starve to death waiting for the divine feed bag to show up, or for a community of sincere seekers to provide for me. Instead I went out and got a job.
So, at the core of delusional thinking is fantastic magical thinking. Every religion has its fantastic magical thinking, this is what we need to dump, while seeking to live an enlightened life.